Hey.
Remember that night you and me we laid side by side
And i stabbed your spleen, with my knife?
Then we snorted fifty lines
And i sat and watched you die
Then we laughed and kissed and ********
You hit me so hard I couldn't sit up
And i had a black eye, and a bleeding nose
My world was dizzy, and you broke a few more bones
Then when I woke up
I grabbed my gun. I shot you right under your lung
And the blood saturated my kitchen floor
But i couldnt help myself, I shot you some more!
Then when you stopped bleeding you grabbed my head
And threw me like a rag doll into the bed
You kissed my neck and traced my hips
Then you bit like a vampire into my lips
It felt so good; but i wanted more.
I grabbed a razorblade, and pushed you to the floor
Picked the bluest artery, and took a slash
And watched in orgasm at the bleeding gash
You couldnt move, and I sat in the blood
I drowned in it. But I was in love.
Wow
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed with this. I wish I could write as... well I don't know what to call your writing. It is very passionate and angry, lusty and daring. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep writing!
Oohhhhh
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful....
prolific self-indictment, indeed. . . still I find it intriguing, to say the least. . . more power to you. peace. elle
ReplyDeletewow.. kinky. lol. thanks for posting, it's not really my style but it's well written and unique.
ReplyDeletewow great write i like it
ReplyDelete~maggot~